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《我想》

2016-04-03 11:03:24 阅读() 作者:王鼎(216班)

                                                                           《我想》                                                                                                        

                                                       我想把头发,                                                                                

                                                      种在边疆上。

                                                     让它慢慢地长大,

                                                    长啊——长——

                                                   长出一棵棵大树。

 

                                                我想把鼻子,

                                               装在花园里。

                                             等待花开花,

                                            闻着---闻着——

                                            闻出了花的香味。

                      

                                            我想把耳朵,

                                            装在海里。

                                            听着——听着——

                                             听出了鱼儿嘻戏的声音。

 

                                            我想把眼睛,

                                             装在天文望远镜上。

                                             望着美丽的宇宙,

                                              望啊——望啊——

                                              望出了宇宙的奥秘。

 

                                              我想把身躯,

                                              装在船上,

                                               带着航海家们一起去航行 

                                              游啊——游啊——

                                             又到了世界的尽头。

 

                                           我想——我想——

点评老师:王毅荣

是啊,童年的美好想象,是我们的憧憬!小作者放飞自己的想象任思绪驰骋,写下一首明了精湛的小诗。

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